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midnight_bloom
midnight_bloomLv52mthmidnight_bloom

Who's the narrator? The narrator has some sort of personality on its own. It adds spice to the whole storytelling. I'm loving your story so far. Though there are grammatical errors here and there, I can certainly overlook it because I'm more focused on the content. Would still suggest to do some editting. Your work is cool. Please keep going. 👍

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Endbringer

Shionokami

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Shionokami
ShionokamiAuthorShionokami

Thanks! It makes me happy that you liked it! I'm also thankful for the tips I will try to get better, I promise! As for the narrator, you got to stick around, to find out who it is! Wink,Wink =)

midnight_bloom
midnight_bloomLv5midnight_bloom

another character, perhaps? exciting

Shionokami:Thanks! It makes me happy that you liked it! I'm also thankful for the tips I will try to get better, I promise! As for the narrator, you got to stick around, to find out who it is! Wink,Wink =)
Shionokami
ShionokamiAuthorShionokami

Well, who knows? XD

midnight_bloom:another character, perhaps? exciting