Review Detail of Chitawulf in Endbringer

It's obvious that the author put a lot of work into this novel, and I really like how the world is set up. The whole concept of a magical island isn't too unique, but it's still exciting enough to get me invested. There are a lot of spelling, punctuation, and grammar errors, enough to the point where it's hard to read at times. There are a lot of run on sentences that interfere with ease of access. The story heavily relies on dialogue for the most part, but when the author uses descriptive language, it's executed well. I really like the concept of beastmen, and how they're integrated in society, as well as the magic too. One suggestion I'd have is to focus less on telling us things through narration and having enough faith in the reader to allow them to interpret things how they see them. Instead of saying "this scared her" you can use something even as simple as "her eyes opened wide and she gasped" and it still gives the reader the same information - the difference is that the reader can vividly picture her with her eyes open wide, whereas if you just say she was scared, you don't know what to imagine. The more things that are told straight up to us, the harder it is for us to really know what's going on in your story, and the harder it is to follow and stay invested in. Good work and I wish you luck! You've already gotten so much done so far, continue to improve and ask for criticism, it's really nice to see so many reviews on this book.