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Interesting premise. I can definitely see the anime/manga/light novel influence on your work. You've got a good start, but there could definitely be some editing for the punctuation mistakes. With more practice you will improve, though. Keep on writing, you'll do good author!

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Thanks! I will work on that i promise!