Review Detail of Blackwater in Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson

I try to give an Objective review, or at least as close as I can. The Quality of the story is great, very few errors that disrupt the reading, the Characters storytelling and the dynamics are also present in a easy to understand way wich is not common for a Fanfic. The Tempo and the Flow of the story are also strong pointsy no plotpoint felt to drawn out or overly long. My Criticism comes from a few places, first the Plot transition, it kinda gets better the more Arcs you read and even the Autor himself has said that he is working on it. A few times in the Early arcs this transition is to abrupt. The OC or AU elements of the story, you can love them or hate them, i will talk about that later in my personal opinion, but many of the stuff that happens feels forced. If like the Autor hinted, and he wants to make the MC stronger for Boruto than this is one thing, but the AU and OC elements should been hinted sooner or the Implementation slower, this was to fast and much in a short time. All in all it's a Good Naruto Fanfic even if I expected something different from the Book Title. Now my personal opinion, i had a love/ hate relationship with this story up until now. I love most of the Stuff the MC does, am Happy with the Romance part so far even if it took forever and like the Flow, speed and writing style. On the other hand I hate nearly the whole OC Plot, i fully understand that is part of the story but honestly it isn't what I came to read about. So it's kinda sad, i want to like this story, but it's just not for me, it's a good story but simple not my taste. But still, for someone that doesn't have this problems the story is a great addition for anyone that is looking for a Naruto Fanfic. 4/5