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AS9
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Garbage.... Author tried to be over-smart but ****ed it up instead.... The kid can somehow use and even evolve Sharingan without activating his Chakra network.. SURE..... He won't train taijutsu because he will be injured even though we've already seen kids like Kakashi and Itachi do it at around the same time.. SURE.... He won't even fucking train Chakra control because apparently that's dangerous as well even though we've seen kids use ninjutsu when they were like four... SURE.....

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Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson

ForgottenLife

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ForgottenLife
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Are you sure about that? Kid Itachi learnt first jutsu at age 5. Kakashi entered academy at age 5. And the taijutsu training is the intense training with weights. No sane 5 year old kid did that, not even Kakashi and Itachi. So, if you want to point things out, do it after you have read a little bit. In chapter 10, he is only 4 years old. Now if you want to talk about Itachi geting his kill in war, then he did it with a kunai. not a ninjutsu. This story is a fan-fic not the Original story.

AS9
AS9Lv14AS9

Do you think they managed to learn to something as advanced as elimental jutsu before training chakra control first? Maybe Itachi but definitely not Kakashi....

ForgottenLife:Are you sure about that? Kid Itachi learnt first jutsu at age 5. Kakashi entered academy at age 5. And the taijutsu training is the intense training with weights. No sane 5 year old kid did that, not even Kakashi and Itachi. So, if you want to point things out, do it after you have read a little bit. In chapter 10, he is only 4 years old. Now if you want to talk about Itachi geting his kill in war, then he did it with a kunai. not a ninjutsu. This story is a fan-fic not the Original story.
AS9
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Itachi using kunai to kill trained ninja means he already had basic training in how to handle weapons... That would mean he had already started physical training.... As for Kakashi, he defeated two chuunin ninjas using only taijutsu when he was four..... And it wasn't reckless punches either, they were well-coordinated, practiced, and precise kicks.....

ForgottenLife:Are you sure about that? Kid Itachi learnt first jutsu at age 5. Kakashi entered academy at age 5. And the taijutsu training is the intense training with weights. No sane 5 year old kid did that, not even Kakashi and Itachi. So, if you want to point things out, do it after you have read a little bit. In chapter 10, he is only 4 years old. Now if you want to talk about Itachi geting his kill in war, then he did it with a kunai. not a ninjutsu. This story is a fan-fic not the Original story.
ForgottenLife
ForgottenLifeAuthorForgottenLife

Now you are contradicting yourself. You whine about no training, then argue that it isn't possible. And yes, you can perform ninjutsu without chakra training. Sasuke was able to use fireball jutsu. It was only after becoming a genin that Kakashi trained them in chakra control during Land of Waves arc.

AS9:Do you think they managed to learn to something as advanced as elimental jutsu before training chakra control first? Maybe Itachi but definitely not Kakashi....
AS9
AS9Lv14AS9

Yes that's why I said maybe Itachi, genius 🤦‍♂️..... Definitely not Kakashi... There's no way he could've used multi shadow clone and doton technique without chakra control training....

ForgottenLife:Now you are contradicting yourself. You whine about no training, then argue that it isn't possible. And yes, you can perform ninjutsu without chakra training. Sasuke was able to use fireball jutsu. It was only after becoming a genin that Kakashi trained them in chakra control during Land of Waves arc.
AS9
AS9Lv14AS9

And I wasn't whining about no training.... I couldn't care less.... My review was entirely about your reasoning behind the no training being inadequate and incorrect.... Not to mention, being able to use chakra internally to evolve is by far the most ridiculous thing I've read this week....

ForgottenLife:Now you are contradicting yourself. You whine about no training, then argue that it isn't possible. And yes, you can perform ninjutsu without chakra training. Sasuke was able to use fireball jutsu. It was only after becoming a genin that Kakashi trained them in chakra control during Land of Waves arc.
AS9
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evolve the sharingan*

AS9:And I wasn't whining about no training.... I couldn't care less.... My review was entirely about your reasoning behind the no training being inadequate and incorrect.... Not to mention, being able to use chakra internally to evolve is by far the most ridiculous thing I've read this week....
ForgottenLife
ForgottenLifeAuthorForgottenLife

Sure, every person has their own interests. Maybe, my fan-fic isn't for you. There are various other fan-fics out there which are much better than mine. I just had an idea which I thought to be cool and I wrote on it. Everyone has different tastes, I hope you will be able to find your perfect story.

AS9:And I wasn't whining about no training.... I couldn't care less.... My review was entirely about your reasoning behind the no training being inadequate and incorrect.... Not to mention, being able to use chakra internally to evolve is by far the most ridiculous thing I've read this week....
AS9
AS9Lv14AS9

Farewell!! No hard feeling, fam.....

ForgottenLife:Sure, every person has their own interests. Maybe, my fan-fic isn't for you. There are various other fan-fics out there which are much better than mine. I just had an idea which I thought to be cool and I wrote on it. Everyone has different tastes, I hope you will be able to find your perfect story.
ForgottenLife
ForgottenLifeAuthorForgottenLife

Bye!

AS9:Farewell!! No hard feeling, fam.....
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AS9
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😂

ForgottenLife:Bye!
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BreezyNovels
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Probably not the right review to ask on but has the romantic interest been decided yet through the polls? And if so can you tell me who it is?

ForgottenLife:Bye!
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Baneofthedragon
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Like i said you got your facts wrong dude just dont know anything else to say

ForgottenLife:Are you sure about that? Kid Itachi learnt first jutsu at age 5. Kakashi entered academy at age 5. And the taijutsu training is the intense training with weights. No sane 5 year old kid did that, not even Kakashi and Itachi. So, if you want to point things out, do it after you have read a little bit. In chapter 10, he is only 4 years old. Now if you want to talk about Itachi geting his kill in war, then he did it with a kunai. not a ninjutsu. This story is a fan-fic not the Original story.
Baneofthedragon
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Like i said you got your facts wrong dude just dont know anything else to say

ForgottenLife:Are you sure about that? Kid Itachi learnt first jutsu at age 5. Kakashi entered academy at age 5. And the taijutsu training is the intense training with weights. No sane 5 year old kid did that, not even Kakashi and Itachi. So, if you want to point things out, do it after you have read a little bit. In chapter 10, he is only 4 years old. Now if you want to talk about Itachi geting his kill in war, then he did it with a kunai. not a ninjutsu. This story is a fan-fic not the Original story.
Velzy
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There are certain people who are born with a brain defect. I don't know how the author can handle this kind of comment

AS9
AS9Lv14AS9

What? Every single point I made was correct. Author even argued with me in the replies. What sort of a brain dead **** are you? Can't you even read?

Velzy:There are certain people who are born with a brain defect. I don't know how the author can handle this kind of comment
AS9
AS9Lv14AS9

aaahhhh.... Deleted it and reposted it.... nice...

Velzy:There are certain people who are born with a brain defect. I don't know how the author can handle this kind of comment
PizzasAreNeat
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There was a poll?

BreezyNovels:Probably not the right review to ask on but has the romantic interest been decided yet through the polls? And if so can you tell me who it is?
Uncle_Sheogorath
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In this website readers somehow worship most authors like some gods if they enjoy their fanfic.

AS9:What? Every single point I made was correct. Author even argued with me in the replies. What sort of a brain dead **** are you? Can't you even read?
DaoistFl6iCu
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Конечно этот фанфик не идеален, но мне нравится этот фанфик. Никто в этом мире не идеален