Very great first chapter, I’ll stick to it, but the chapter length is a bit small. But its ok for a first chapter! Guess I’ll see you grow! The idea of multiple MCs is pretty rare in Webnovels and the way three stories are narrated is very good, I like how you kept the readers in thrall with end of each character, I think you have already established the plot line, and there are so many questions I have, but I think they will be answered soon, and i think this story will achieve something if the quality is consistent! Cheers!
ShinoHere
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