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DaisukiDayoSenpai
DaisukiDayoSenpaiLv124yr
2020-08-23 15:18

A great cultivation book! I highly recommend this one. I'll try to review this book with no spoilers xD. Basically, you get two choi.. oof! Alright, seriously now. The book start off a bit heavy for me since there was too much information. Well, this is expected for a cultivation novel. The overall pacing is alright, you just have to improve on the smoothness of the story. I don't know how to put it but there were parts that sound a bit broken like it doesn't really flow that much. But well, that's just my gut feeling so don't mind it too much. I really enjoyed it! I hope you keep updating since this novel is promising! Keep it up! ^ ^

Lightning's Attraction

Henry_Hyren
4.6
17 Chs

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Henry_Hyren
Henry_HyrenAuthor

I will try my best to improve, Thanks for the advice, I really needed that. I hope that in the future, u can give more comments for me to improve on

4yr
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DaisukiDayoSenpai
DaisukiDayoSenpaiLv12

No worries ^ ^ I've probably read too much cultivation novels that I got used to their progression. One of the things I found on the high-ranked cultivation novels is their release of information. Don't release too much nor too little and I think your book will flow more smoothly. That's just my opinion though. Your book is already amazing as it is :))

Henry_Hyren:I will try my best to improve, Thanks for the advice, I really needed that. I hope that in the future, u can give more comments for me to improve on
4yr
Henry_Hyren
Henry_HyrenAuthor

i'll keep that in mind, it's really helpful since i have a hard time at those, thanks again

4yr
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Readoholic
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The cover is beautiful... :) The title is catchy.. :) And the plot.. speechless.. it really seeking attention. I love these kinda stories and I am tbh already waiting for the next chapters. A wonderful plot and the most exciting part will be the forbidden love story. The pace of the story is perfect and the character description and story narrations are wonderful. Waiting for the story to unfold. Good Work.:)

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uniqueanime2
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I loved this book! It had adventure, intrigue, romance, and awesome characters. The storyline moved along flawlessly and kept me totally involved. If these characters were to appear again for another adventure, I would be along for the ride.

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Dann_Giovanni
Dann_GiovanniLv1

Lightning's attraction is a book of fiction made by Henry_Hyren. The main audience of the story are cultivator fans and anyone who's in love with the genre. The story is told in a good way of narration that I've personally fallen in love with. What I like about the book is the creativity spent to think of unique Chinese names. (Maybe because I don't read these kind of novels, hehe.) Even now, I couldn't pronounce their names properly, The flaws of the book includes some grammatical mistakes that could be easily fixed with proofreading. Word choice is great, but I've noticed some words were used repeatedly such as cower in fear. Character design is is also a flaw as it lacked descriptions of various characters aside from apparel. I was able to picture the scenarios clearly, so this will cover up for the CD. That is all I could criticize about, the rest are great. Overall, it was an interesting read. -Dann Giovanni

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JustLikeWriting777
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Going good so far. I like how interestingly mysterious it is even though it's fantasy. I like the plot and find myself curious about the MC. I hope you publish more. Very well written :)

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Avery_Sky
Avery_SkyLv1

The story so far is just wonderful. The delivery and writing style really brings out the creativity and imagery of the story. It's not what I would usually read but I will recommend reading it!

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pelzy
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I don't know whether the 'stick around' part was part of the description or for me, but I am sticking around. the description has a way of capturing me so good job and good luck to you.

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RachelleWolf
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Not my usual read, but definitely worth it! Fast paced action, interesting characters and diving into a world and setting that is beautifully set up. A must add to your reading collection. Can't wait for more!

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deepu_
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I like the main xin zishen.. I see the plot is well written and author has a hood grasp on the background.. The plot is also very easy to read.. Over all the story is nice and I would like to see how it goes..

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ZeusTheOlympian
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Reveal spoiler

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