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Review Detail of BRPever in WATER: The Three Forces.

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The story is good, and writing seems better with the progress. The first chap was short with just dialogues but it became gradually better and the world and the surrounding became more clearer as it progressed. Also, the characters are personality-wise and in the way in which they contribute to the overall story. Tl;DR, not a bad read, with a little improvement can be an excellent story.

WATER: The Three Forces.

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Thanks for the review! I might actually re-write it so it has a better "flow" with the rest of the chapters