Review Detail of DaoistzDK2dK in Imperial Nanny Ying Yue
Review detail
Made it 16 chapters before decing to not continue Good story idea But yhe chapters Repeated the prior chapters story alot and the story jumped scenes too often and fidnt flow Also some holes in story plot made confusing
Imperial Nanny Ying Yue
Dominique1412
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Dominique1412AuthorDominique1412
Thanks for the straightforward review! Although it pained me that you didn't find your happy place in my novel series, I understand. It's impossible to please everyone's tastes. As for my writing abilities, I'm still only just a beginner at this and I'm doing everything that I can to improve by each passing day. I hope you have an enjoyable adventure elsewhere.