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JBandJHope
JBandJHopeAuthor4yr
2020-09-01 04:24

(okay so Imma just review my own book because why not, HAHAHA!) Anyways, I just want to thank everyone for reading Dancing On Thin Ice. I LOVE YOU ALL SO MUCH AHHHH!!! Reviews mean the WORLD TO ME. I really want to know how my readers are viewing my book, and if they are truly enjoying it. I also really love reading all your SUPER CUTE comments, it just makes me smile! Thank you again for your amazing support, you beautiful people, and please reach out to me if you have any questions/comments/concerns :) I love you! (P.S. I actually originally published on Wattpad first, which currently has more chapters present there, so if you want, you can go ahead and read it on Wattpad.) Instagram: @wildroo_s Snapchat: urooba_salar

Dancing On Thin Ice

JBandJHope
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Readoholic
ReadoholicLv10

I really like this kinda novels. I really enjoyed the story line and also the characters are very interesting, ha that's an understatement, they are more than interesting, I just can't find the right words. Story pace is perfect and the humor punches are at right place. Keep up the good work. :)

4yr

NOLONGERAUSER
NOLONGERAUSERLv2

This story was very intriguing, was a definite page-turner. I felt like I was hit with more surprises in each chapter I read. The author did an amazing job of making a Mc that was out of the box for a female Mc and that along with the other characters and the progressing plot made the story that much more enjoyable. This is a hell of a good read!

4yr
EldritchTheDead
EldritchTheDeadLv2

Not really my kind of genre but it was quite satisfying. But I can tell that the story has a lot more to offer, would recommend to readers that love this type of genre. Anyways more power to the author.

4yr
immabecale
immabecaleLv2

I know that this is too early but I may have misinterpreted the character but for now, I have issues with her, to be honest. As for the writer's ability to make a novel, it is quality. I didn't know that this was a fan fiction until I saw a review. I am looking forward for the next chapters.

4yr
Drapetomaniac12
Drapetomaniac12Lv4

Dude you're super talented!!! I had so much fun while reading your fan fiction. I laughed and laughed and laughed. It's added to my library. Will catch up with the updates. Your book is full of humour and lots of love. Loved it. It deserves its 5 stars.

4yr
raima_alam
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A very good story. I really liked it.😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍.................................................Hope to read more books like this.

4yr
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