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RicJBS
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I do honest reviews. Always. So, sorry if you feel bad. I really liked the story. It had a feel that the middle aged century was brought into a modern world story. The struggles of a young girl living a life in the shadows of the males. I love the concept. But i am pretty dissatisfied by the grammar. I, as a new reader and writer, look for the grammar and vocabulary first. Vocabulary was on point but the grammar needs to be edited thoroughly.

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Brintha_Pauldurai
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The grammar is not that bad right ?

shaznalye06
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yep not that bad

Brintha_Pauldurai:The grammar is not that bad right ?
RicJBS
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its average but not excellent

Brintha_Pauldurai:The grammar is not that bad right ?