First of all, that's an uncomfortably large vocabulary usage. I had to search some meanings on Google (my English is not that good). I enjoyed your short chapters because it is easy to read through without thinking wayyyy too much as the sentence itself already makes sense just as simple. I mean, we are all a little lazy and short chapters are just easy to navigate.š¤·š»āāļø Don't let anyone say otherwise. I do agree that you could lengthen the chapter or describe the character's profile, but that's about it. I was pretty interested in the way you write, especially to build my vocabulary.š
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