Review Detail of Liam_Fletcher in SON OF THE HERO KING (Terminated the contract on WN read the synopsis)
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This novel is honestly one of my favorites out there and. it is just absolutely amazing. it is a little rushed without too much background information but it is not a big deal.
SON OF THE HERO KING (Terminated the contract on WN read the synopsis)
HIKARU_GENJI
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I just think that the story is going too fast without the needed character information such as Liliths depression
HIKARU_GENJI:đThanks for the review Please could you tell me what you mean by rushed? It could help me make the novel better. It's hard to take everything into account with an ongoing story so getting feedback like this can help greatly.
đ¤About Lilith, it isn't because it is going fast but rather that she isn't the focus yet. The name of my volume and the interlude must have shown it, but each volume focus on a particular girl . First volume was the witch and the interlude showed Medea past. Then ,you had the saint and interlude with Camelia. Then the knight with interlude about Setsuna. Currently the volume is the maid and the interlude will be of course about Milia. Though don't worry. The volume after this is the Queenđ.
Liam_Fletcher:I just think that the story is going too fast without the needed character information such as Liliths depression
HIKARU_GENJI:đ¤About Lilith, it isn't because it is going fast but rather that she isn't the focus yet. The name of my volume and the interlude must have shown it, but each volume focus on a particular girl . First volume was the witch and the interlude showed Medea past. Then ,you had the saint and interlude with Camelia. Then the knight with interlude about Setsuna. Currently the volume is the maid and the interlude will be of course about Milia. Though don't worry. The volume after this is the Queenđ.
HIKARU_GENJI:đThanks for the review Please could you tell me what you mean by rushed? It could help me make the novel better. It's hard to take everything into account with an ongoing story so getting feedback like this can help greatly.