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Charlzie
CharlzieLv42yr
2022-04-26 15:24

This novel is just schemes in schemes between schemes, who are all nothing in the grand scheme. I love this but…. The MC is too passive, look I’m not asking for a super strategist or super soldier MC but lately he’s been getting dragged around by the plot, he’s talking the initiative and investigating stuff but nothing important. At the end he’s nothing without all the women protecting him. While his father was the opposite, ironic as it is it’s true. I read most comments and look at your replies so I know the answer to most of these but still, you must know yourself how frustrating it is to see an MC getting dragged around by the plot. Currently at chapter 110, read all of this in one go and i’m stopping for today. I will continue tomorrow. I’m hoping he’ll finally get character development soon, everything that changed about him until now wasn’t character development, just minor changes, a lot of them tho, they affected him but still, no major changes. Anyways I enjoy your story and continue on reading it, here are my thoughts after reading 100+ chapters.

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