Review Detail of amaturewriter in Naruto: New life
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I'll tell u what I didnt like.... -MC's personality....its bland and also forced as fk..this dude cares about someone just like that..the fk? why? He is in a new world, first priority should be himself not anyone else [and if u say that both the people have similar lives, that BS,,,MC a kid...far worse] And he just died and isekaied, why would care about someone else? -and the interactions..this made me dropped....C3...damn man, the OG kyuubi was willing to manipulate a kid to get his vengeance..he hates humanity..he only liked them towards the end of naruto and that was mainly cause it was because of naruto...here its 4 yrs it spend with naruto....my ass it'll accept a hug from naruto like that....u forced this interaction. -genderbend.....atleast change the name dont force **** man..thats all I can say
Naruto: New life
Abdou944
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There will be a minor spoiler 1-th helped kurama because he will need his chakra in his escape plan that will happen in couple of chapter and he cares about kurama because he need a partner in this new world and kurama is the best choice 2- I will not lie I too think that the interaction is a bit forced but I'm a new writing and this the best i can do. And the kyuubi in this fan-fic is an OC and will have the same character of the canon 3- about the name I didn't think that need to until now And I try to do something about it later. 4- thank you for your review, it helped me to see some problems that I can fix
GL.....kurama is hatred in physical form......thats why I just dropped ur bk....I get u wanted power....I wouldnt have minded if it happened in a few yr....here it was rushed and as a result it was retarded
Abdou944:There will be a minor spoiler 1-th helped kurama because he will need his chakra in his escape plan that will happen in couple of chapter and he cares about kurama because he need a partner in this new world and kurama is the best choice 2- I will not lie I too think that the interaction is a bit forced but I'm a new writing and this the best i can do. And the kyuubi in this fan-fic is an OC and will have the same character of the canon 3- about the name I didn't think that need to until now And I try to do something about it later. 4- thank you for your review, it helped me to see some problems that I can fix