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PinguGod_Lv54yr
2020-08-13 21:36

Although the story only has 2 chapters as of now, it's amazing. The grammar and vocabulary are great and the flow of the story is fantastic. When I read the 2 current chapters, I became completely mesmerized by it. I really hope to see more of it.

The Problem Child Is Climbing the Tower, Isn’t he?

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God_Mode_ep
God_Mode_epLv2

Right off the bat, it's a ToG fic with great grammar. Instant 5 stars for that. Not to mention it's a bada*s character like Izayoi which makes it 10 times better. Man, it only has two chapters. So for now, this has to do. I will make another review when you have more chapters. Good Luck, buddy.

4yr

Lightazen
LightazenLv3

It's Izayoi, enough said. Jokes aside this actually a pretty accurate representation of Izayoi, dude's a hedonist who got no respect for authorities and may even challenge them to a fight just to have fun. Don't forget though, that Izayoi is actually very smart so don't turn him into an idiot that will do stupid things for fun. Granted, he might do that sometimes but he is still a genius. Now, grammar is pretty good, only got some few typos here and there. For the story though, since Izayoi didn't get nerfed I expect a lot of curbstomping, however a super OP MC is normally boring to read, but the idea of Izayoi dominating every fights is very very interesting. Only got 2 chapters, which is a shame. Don't follow canon, with an MC as strong as Izayoi, canon can go bye bye~ I expect a lot of chapters from now on, please do update frequently. I am looking forward to how your story will turn out. Many thanks. Light's out~

4yr
Nameless_Godless
Nameless_GodlessLv5

Pingu sent me here and I agree with the other two review awesome story Author. Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash

4yr
Klazy_Labbit
Klazy_LabbitLv5

Take all my stones..... I will write an actual review when this has more CHS but for now I have really high expectations from this book.

4yr
DaoistahFek8
DaoistahFek8Lv3

Great job👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

3yr
Sidotaku
SidotakuLv1

Nunca achei que dois poucos capítulos de uma novel iriam me prender de curiosidade de tal maneira , o mlk fez fumaça na minha mente , a vibe que eu sinto e curiosidade infinita , grande futuro irmão Isso AE , não sei mas o que escrever então , tchuchathcuahch Pronto

4yr
dustsans666
dustsans666Lv4

Reveal spoiler

3yr
DaoistahFek8
DaoistahFek8Lv3

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