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cyprisbxilzTTVLv113yr
2021-02-06 09:12

the book is fire the story development is good the mc is emo but when the mom die it had me crying b ............

My Lucky

ChristineWalter2
4.9
454 Chs

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ChristineWalter2
ChristineWalter2Author

Thank you for the review and reading my story. It means a lot to me!

3yr
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Pointbreak
PointbreakLv15

Long ago, the four clans lived in harmony... However, everthing changed when the FireWing Clan attacke—what? Wrong script? *Rummages through piles of messy scripts* ...Welp, you just gonna have to read the story to find out what happens

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Bezaleel_Hephzibah
Bezaleel_HephzibahLv1

My lucky hmm... A story that really had me spell bound right from the youthful exuberance of Lucky, the shift of attention or should I say affection from father to son and later father to the mother 😂 despite her "resurrection" 😂 in another body. Awesome I would say. Anyway I see it as a good story to lighten up your mood and immerse you into the world of (should I say reality ?) or (fantasy? ) based on the first 2 chapters and also the entire story of the book respectively . The plot is superb, as well as also the twists and turns in the story. Big thumbs up Christine. You rule.

3yr
DeatonLatoya
DeatonLatoyaModerator

I totally love this. Good work author. Nice plot . Nice story development and stability. Nice plot twist and character build Everything is nice. Very good

3yr
Joyce_Wanjiku_6127
Joyce_Wanjiku_6127Lv1

This story is a total page turner. Starting with the idea of the justifires, chaos in the world, new characters presented in the story and a broken home and lost love.. I love Lucky's portraid character.

4yr
Jeff_Wade
Jeff_WadeLv1

Woah woah woah... I love how the characters are potrayed and how their feelings are well explained. I loved every chapter and all I need is more of this "Lucky Sweetness"...

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Wateristubeg
WateristubegLv3

I have to admit, the first few chapters caught me by surprise. The synopsis was good that it made me want to read more about the book. The chapters were well written and honestly, I find it a refreshing read. Kudos to the author for doing a good job <3

2yr
Nandani_Rathore
Nandani_RathoreLv1

what an interesting book author, I really like the idea how you have described the mother Earth here in the book also how beautifully you have explained the chaos. more success to you♥️♥️

2yr
Jenny_Da_Gold
Jenny_Da_GoldLv1

One of the best stories out here ❤️‍🔥 Read a lotta stories but ain’t ever seen one to hook me so much hahaha. Intriguing and full of suspense to give you goosebumps so of course I’d get addicted to it 👌.

3yr
Daoist_2193
Daoist_2193Lv1

So far, so good. The story line is great and the character's build up is 😎 awesome too. The background world and all that is down to detail and I absolutely love 😘 this. Will be following up till the end.

3yr
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