Review Detail of SomethingElse1 in The Great Demon System

I usually read a good bit before I make a review but I couldn't even finish chapter 1. Reading it was like reading something an elementary student had written. There weren't any grammar or spelling mistakes but the writing quality and vocabulary was so low that it somehow hurt more than reading those novels that can barely be considered English. I've seen people compare this to vampire system, which I also dropped and it was very obvious right from the get-go. At least that one I got through a fair bit of chapters before I dropped it. First impressions are always important and when a reader sees chapter 1 and its glaring issues that to this day remains unresolved, they'll turn away. Not everyone will see your message that the novel improves later on, and even if they do, they may ignore it. Webnovels quantity over quality mindset is infectious.