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1234Paul
1234PaulLv23yr1234Paul

Horibble novel.... Started good only because it's a copy of a faimous light novel. After chapter 70, the novel, is going down... Too many plot holes and dumb things from the author. For example: MC's group will fight with an opponent, and Mc tells the group the full extent of the power of that person. A few days later, one of mc's group member fight with that person and forgot about what mc told her, nearly being killed. Yeah, the novel is full of shits like these, won't recomend it to nobody, that's it if you want in my opinion, "copied" stories.

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1234Paul
1234PaulLv21234Paul

He is also a simp. He will fall in love with a thot that wanted to make him her pet (and does it) and later wanted to kill him...