Review Detail of Ray_paul in The Great Demon System

Item: The Great Demon System
Rating: 2.2

Review detail

Ray_paulLv23yrRay_paul

Basically a surface read. Author copies the structure of vampire system and tries to make it his own. I admit this isn't much of a problem as mvs is also frustrating but this is so over the top and there really isn't a reason for that. The MC is a psychopath basically because the story demands it and because he is supposed to be a demon. Not as creative as the book think it is.

The Great Demon System

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DripAuthorDrip

Thanks for the review!! 😊❤

3yr

PhytrixLv11Phytrix

He's not a psychopath , he's a forced edgy **** that tries way to hard to be dark. Psychopaths are cold and calculated and not as emotional as this guy who's ready to kill people for anything. Vampire System is definitely not deserved to be first but I wouldn't say this is much better

3yr

Ray_paulLv2Ray_paul

so true

Phytrix:He's not a psychopath , he's a forced edgy **** that tries way to hard to be dark. Psychopaths are cold and calculated and not as emotional as this guy who's ready to kill people for anything. Vampire System is definitely not deserved to be first but I wouldn't say this is much better

3yr