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Review Detail of THE_WORDSMITH in The Elementals

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The thing which I really look forward to in this novel is development. In my personal opinion, any and every story has the potential of becoming an artwork and this is one of those stories. What you need to improve on is detailing everything a little such as the characters, the monsters, the world and the story background, and when you do that this novel will mature very well. Tip: Imagine more with more intensity. Looking forward to the growth.

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