Review Detail of ephemery in The Evil Dragon Reincarnates Into A Human

Interesting. You have a very good plot, I'm all in for action and fantasy and this type of book is something that really makes readers intrigued. There are just some points I'd like to address. You could use an editing app for your grammar mistakes. It can be improved through time and a little bit of editing could already go a long way. You're in the right track, keep it up and good job, author!