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2021-01-06 02:13

If this book had a good editor it would be in the top 3 list!!❤️❤️ I’ve been taken in by this story. I’m in love with the two strong female leads and their perspective mates. All four go through so many trials, adventures and heartache to learn the true meaning of love and forgiveness. The grammatical errors are all over but i imagine it’s only because of the language translation. Give this book a try!! You Won’t regret it! 🥰🥰

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Anamika_Ana
Anamika_AnaAuthor

Thank you so much for your support. I will definitely work on it cause I'm only college girl and it was my 3rd book without any editor. I have recently hired an editor. Probably you guys won't feel difficulties in the future. Thank you so much. You spent your precious time over this raw version. I'm sincerely sorry for the errors. I will definitely work on it as English isn't my mother tongue 💓😪

Lisa_Fountaine
Lisa_FountaineLv12

For English not being your first language, you do very well. We get the idea of what you are saying and mean. It is a captivating story so we keep reading 😉 When you get an editor, have them do this one too and I think it will become very popular.

Anamika_Ana:Thank you so much for your support. I will definitely work on it cause I'm only college girl and it was my 3rd book without any editor. I have recently hired an editor. Probably you guys won't feel difficulties in the future. Thank you so much. You spent your precious time over this raw version. I'm sincerely sorry for the errors. I will definitely work on it as English isn't my mother tongue 💓😪
Anamika_Ana
Anamika_AnaAuthor

Thank you so much for your kind words.As a beginning writer, we can't afford editor untill we get a certain admiration.My editor is working on it. Hopefully it would help the book to gain more recognition in the platform. Thanks a lot for your generous support 😊😊😊

Lisa_Fountaine:For English not being your first language, you do very well. We get the idea of what you are saying and mean. It is a captivating story so we keep reading 😉 When you get an editor, have them do this one too and I think it will become very popular.
Lisa_Fountaine
Lisa_FountaineLv12

We get it sweetie. It takes money to get there but you have done great on your own so dont apologize. Like I said, you have written a great story and thats why we support you and this book... With a little editing, there is no reason this book cant give The Crowns Obession a run for its money 😉 Just keep writing, improve where you can, and keep us locked into the story 😘

Anamika_Ana:Thank you so much for your kind words.As a beginning writer, we can't afford editor untill we get a certain admiration.My editor is working on it. Hopefully it would help the book to gain more recognition in the platform. Thanks a lot for your generous support 😊😊😊
Lisa_Fountaine
Lisa_FountaineLv12

If I may ask- What country are you in?

Anamika_Ana:Thank you so much for your kind words.As a beginning writer, we can't afford editor untill we get a certain admiration.My editor is working on it. Hopefully it would help the book to gain more recognition in the platform. Thanks a lot for your generous support 😊😊😊
Anamika_Ana
Anamika_AnaAuthor

Bangladesh dear

Lisa_Fountaine:If I may ask- What country are you in?
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