Review Detail of AxlSLL in Long Gone

The story manages to be engaging and fun to follow. The interactions between its characters can be stirring sometimes, though some might find them cheesy. The story happens too fast. By the first chapter, we already have the conflict of the story presented to us, without having the opportunity of getting to know the characters. This is a problem if you want your readers to get to care about them. The plot slowly starts to compensate for this but it is definitely a weak point. You also need to work with your grammar. There are some misspellings and sometimes you mix grammatical tenses. Nothing that makes the story a chore to read but you definitely need to work on this. Otherwise, the plot never manages to fall down and advances in a good direction. Keep working on it.