Review Detail of DaisukiDayoSenpai in Long Gone

Simple and sweet. You could use some more mysterious and suspenseful scenarios but seeing that it's just chapter 6 so far, it's to be expected that it's just getting there. Well-balanced story progression and build-up. Only thing to point out is your tense usage, sometimes it gets a little inconsistent. But that's just a minor issue since us authors tend to do that as well. All in all, great job. Continue on writing ^0^