Review Detail of spicyscribbles in Demon in the Human World

I really like the idea of an all powerful being losing their power and having to learn how to live like a normal person. The story is developing at a smooth pace, which is nice. One way the story could be improved is if the author took the time to "show" us more scenes rather than just describing them. There are also some grammar issues such as wrong punctuation and fluctuating verb tenses that need addressing, but it's not a huge deal. I think it would be pretty cool if the characters had some more substance, because though their interactions are interesting, all of them feel a little flat. In summary, this book has a really interesting concept and, if certain issues are addressed, has a bright future. Best of luck to the author and keep up the good work :D