An interesting story depicting a demon general(from what I understood), who finally came back to his home, only to be sent on another journey yet again. It's intriguing to see how Xuan will hold himself when he is sent to Earth without any of his powers. Real interesting work! The language is relatively good, considering its probably not your first language. This is a great effort considering the fact, keep it up!☺
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