You have written a excelent sotry , cant wait for more A few other overlord stories have done things sLightly similar to your own but one thing which i havent find i think is using the lore of the story to your advantage Why dont you write your characters lore and make yourself OP or give yourself more advantages when the story Starts
Evrabonzz
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LIKEYou do know he's crediting the original author of overlord, like the original overlord. This is just a fanfic (fan written story that is within the world of the original book)
Sosynovsky:Read synopsis to the end, Evrabonzz isn’t author, he/she is just posting it. He/she is a publisher