The only complaint I have is that because the author is not a native English speaker his grammar is very bad making it hard to read. If the author could find someone to proof read then that would make this fan-fiction practically perfect. First time reading an overlord fan-fiction so I have nothing to compare it to but compared to the other FF's I have read this is pretty top tier. Bonus points for not giving the MC op cheats from the start or some incredible luck.
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