Review Detail of Evrabonzz in Overlord: The Origin

Shameless ! advertising his handsomeness instead of the novel XD hahahhahahah

You can be a good comrade of mine bcs of your narcissim

It's fine, no harm done. Anyway, such thing won't affect the great me. Bwahaha!😎

Your words doesn't mean anything. I have much more audience that liked my fanfic than degenerates like you. So why would I care. Runt all you want. No one gives a sh*t. Hahaha, I'm still alive. What are gonna do? Huh? BAHAHA! Weak!😹🤧

*Sigh* ... humans.😒

This Great Daoist supports the Narcissist movement! You have my support, from one handsome author to another!

I agree with that statement only a impeccable human being could make this culture art piece of a book or are you even human?

Lol .

i would like to learn how to be shameless like you ... i heard they are invincible!!!

Never seen a weird person like you

Is this story gonna be a Harem? if yes then could you make it small? like 2 or 3 girls max?

Who is in and is planned to be in the harem so far.

Nice concept, bad execution. Then again my views in books and fanfiction is a bit higher for novice. You better read the basics of making stories, not sure if you notice this but I can deduce a bit that you mostly do this randomly. Not that I blame you, writing is just for fun. It didn't give you salary etc.

Nice concept, bad execution. Then again my views in books and fanfiction is a bit higher for novice. You better read the basics of making stories, not sure if you notice this but I can deduce a bit that you mostly do this randomly. Not that I blame you, writing is just for fun. It didn't give you salary etc.

I'll give you a review of 5 stars. Why? Because you're summary is awesome xD

Don't dare drop this out

Don't dare drop this oit

Don't dare drop this out

why is the chapter too messy? starting with chapter 85????

Yes