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Clockwork_Jester
Clockwork_JesterLv141yr
2023-02-20 13:39

This story starts out very strong, with the MC amassing a lot of power in the game world prior to the shutdown in ways that mostly make sense. My problem is that once the shutdown hit, the MC suddenly becomes a lot weaker than he reasonably should be, based on his accomplishments up to that point, and he's completely separated from the rest of Nazarrick. Not saying you can't make an interesting story around that premise, but to me it felt like a slap in the face and had a sort of "all your trials are meaningless" implication.

Overlord: The Origin

Evrabonzz
4.7
80 Chs

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Evrabonzz
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What? I wrote it, what do you expect? Handsome Author, Handsome Author, Handsome Author Handsome Author Handsome Author Handsome Author Handsome Author Handsome Author Handsome Author Handsome Author Handsome Author Handsome Author

4yr

SKnight1
SKnight1Lv4

You have written a excelent sotry , cant wait for more A few other overlord stories have done things sLightly similar to your own but one thing which i havent find i think is using the lore of the story to your advantage Why dont you write your characters lore and make yourself OP or give yourself more advantages when the story Starts

4yr
Elastic
ElasticLv5

I start this novel not expecting much but look where it got me... Now I can’t even bare to wait for the slow update. It get very addictive. Author story telling skills are good.

4yr
SHEOGORATH
SHEOGORATHLv5

It is an extremely nice fan fiction, worth your time believe me, and you have nothing better to do so give it a shot, okay ? Oh, don’t listen to those negative reviews, these degenerates are the main reason for the invention of condoms and birth control pills, So please, Protect yourself, and don’t make anymore of those arseholls !

4yr
Nyx_Celeste
Nyx_CelesteLv6

I see Overlord, I bookmark. I see and R-18 Overlord, I bookmark. I see Albedo, I bookmark. But why the hell I even bookmark beside the gorgeous thot succubus cover? That awesome summary that is!

4yr
Shadowuser_0112
Shadowuser_0112Lv3

This site needs more overlord fanfic. Such a good light novel, yet nobody ever expands on it. My only complaint is the small chapters, but at least the updates aren't slow.

4yr
Careless_03
Careless_03Lv4

It was an incredible book. At least the wind up was. The sorry leading up to the New World was great. Then as soon as the game shut off at around chapter 60, the book sharply decrease in quality. there were lots of story arcs and plots that never finished. The author also has huge time skips without explaining much, giving the character way too much power or way to little power to make sense for how long it was. Overall, it was a good read until the new world. It was built up on a solid foundation then the structure itself was built with sand rather than steel.

1yr
Alex1911
Alex1911Lv6

Reveal spoiler

4yr
iTride
iTrideLv6

*me seeing the new cover*

4yr
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