Review Detail of SkyMaster in Fighting For Eternity

The grammar is dead, need proof reading. I'm pulling my own eyes out after this review posted due to very bad Chinese to English translated novel. I would jump down a sea of crocodiles for the nouns and adjectives misplaced everywhere. Also, after my death, please ask the author to take up English classes, not just copy word to word from raw novel websites, it hurts my very soul that I am now entering reincarnation.