Item: Fighting For Eternity
Rating: 5
Author: Sabin_Subedi_Fei

Sabin_Subedi_FeiAuthor3yr

2021-04-11 10:49

Don't me mind the stars. This is the review after we reached the last volume. This novel itself for its own story is too bad. My character pacing was too bad, the world background wasn't explained, updates were not stable, story development was way off the mark. As for the writing quality, don't even get started on that one. But actually, I got a pretty damn good idea and this idea is going to save this novel. I have started a series 'Eternal Series', I've got the idea for five stories including this, while a total number of stories will be eight. Fighting For Eternity is going to be the first and the last story for this series. This story holds much more than a casual story. It holds the idea, spoilers, and background for other stories. So I suggest reading it if you like the first hundred free chapters. My second book 'Magic and Martial War God' and the third book 'Eternal Faith' follow a different yet connected story with Fighting For Eternity. So you can read the free chapters on all three stories and then finally decide whether to read it nor not. Of course, If you don't read one of these novels while not reading the previous one, it doesn't matter. You just need to enjoy and if you can't find enjoyment, drop it.

Fighting For Eternity

Sabin_Subedi_Fei

4.2

266 Chs

Liked by 4 people

Replies4

XYZ_GlxxksyLv14

is there harem in this or 1 love interest

3yr

Sabin_Subedi_FeiAuthor

Harem, but harem is not the main focus, it is only supplement

XYZ_Glxxksy:is there harem in this or 1 love interest

3yr

Mr_RoverLv12

also in this stories , is mc Charity box?? don't play dumb, u know what i mean!🥸

1yr

Mr_RoverLv12

i liked your Yin and yang system! and could you please use, [ ] for system as this " " confuses me with when characters are talking and system prompt came it looks like someone interrupted him in between ! just to make system a different entity.

Sabin_Subedi_Fei:Harem, but harem is not the main focus, it is only supplement

1yr

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