Review Detail of amaturewriter in One piece : reincarnated as akainu( dropped)

I am going to support this for the sole reason that I like this FF's ' plot ' Plus reading ur starting chp, that was a another reason...seeing as cannon is fked, I like it....hope u do as u've promised also author dude/dudette...pls use caps with starting a new sentence/paragraphs [ like see what I did here?, its annoying, dont do this] but once again, pls just try to improve grammar. [Microsoft word, provides basic ****,,,,also there grammarly] Another thing...ur bks, I;ve read em [the mutant FF and the BNHA FF]..dont do what u did there here...plenty of reviews explain what u did wrong...ie: a dumb MC in the mutant FF and ur nerfed MC in BNHA [YES U EXPLAINED BUT MC has too much OP **** that was neutered..so yah, dont neuter]..point is, avoid what u did in those FF's here, some of the reviews explained ur faults. suggestion: no dumbass MC, this is akainu so dont look at world like anime, look at it with a some what darker look, rather than in the OG, or like most one piece FF's...like angst **** isnt necessary but dont make it happy and friendly. Smart MC, use intelligence. any romance just build, and no perverted retard. GL **: the pic looks dope..who ever made is an artist..good choice on presentation....