Kind of astonishing how this story has an overall rating of 4 stars... There's literally no world-building, and characters have no more to them than their names. The story is all over the place. The grammar is fine... but the writer doesn't seem to know what a POV is, since he switches between 1st and 3rd person at the drop of a hat. There's also hate towards the main cast of MHA that I don't understand... If the MC was supposed to have read/watched the series then how come he seems to despise everyone? That really was very out there, with no good reason to be, from what I can see. Hating Bakugo is a normal thing, we already kind of expect that, because he is indeed an ass, but everyone else... what's your reasoning? I honestly want to know it... If only you worked more on describing characters and locations, my review could've been 3 stars, I can't give more than 1 when what we know was told to us by someone else (the author) and not you. Story development, at the start, gives us a very big clue on what you'll do in later chapters too. Gigantic time-skips out of nowhere that you could've used as training time instead, and maybe even to develop relationships (which in hindsight probably wouldn't happen anyway, since MC seems to hate everyone).
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There's a reason why people hate Midoriya, because he just nothing but a whiny kid who keep saying he want to become a hero but never do shit He could train his body if he really want to become a hero, but what he did for the past 10 years? Absolutely nothing! He basically just waiting for a miracle to fall on his lap And he was portrayed as smart person, but it took him 3 SEASONS to realized that he have a f*cking legs!
Despise towards Deku is also understandable... but what about the rest? The dude hates everyone he crosses paths with :/
NeoBee:There's a reason why people hate Midoriya, because he just nothing but a whiny kid who keep saying he want to become a hero but never do shit He could train his body if he really want to become a hero, but what he did for the past 10 years? Absolutely nothing! He basically just waiting for a miracle to fall on his lap And he was portrayed as smart person, but it took him 3 SEASONS to realized that he have a f*cking legs!
I have to be honest, I don't really understand the hate for Midoriya that many people have. You are right he could have done those things, but you thought about that because you can't really relate to him and his situation, not just the bullying, I'm sorry if that is the case, but actually also because of society because NOBODY believes someone without a Quirck can be a hero. To elevate some pain of Midoriya and to better explain my point I brought a picture:
NeoBee:There's a reason why people hate Midoriya, because he just nothing but a whiny kid who keep saying he want to become a hero but never do shit He could train his body if he really want to become a hero, but what he did for the past 10 years? Absolutely nothing! He basically just waiting for a miracle to fall on his lap And he was portrayed as smart person, but it took him 3 SEASONS to realized that he have a f*cking legs!
I admit I disliked him at first. He's one of those characters that are annoying and u would think ur never going to like them but before u know it, they would've grown on u. MHA as a whole is not a series I like but the character development in it is gold and I'm pretty sure the main reason it is so popular is that aspect. So Deku ain't as bad as these fanfics are making him out to be.
Zahage:I have to be honest, I don't really understand the hate for Midoriya that many people have. You are right he could have done those things, but you thought about that because you can't really relate to him and his situation, not just the bullying, I'm sorry if that is the case, but actually also because of society because NOBODY believes someone without a Quirck can be a hero. To elevate some pain of Midoriya and to better explain my point I brought a picture:image
