Review Detail of Maurz in Hunter x Hunter: A Selfish Wish (COMPLETED)
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The Hunter X Hunter background information is good, but I have to be honest, the writing and grammar is not. Increases in power for the MC are not incremental, and a bit too sudden. There's not really much happening story-wise, and the pacing is pretty strange... There's nothing that really invests me in the character that is the MC, and the only reason I would have any care for the rest of the characters in this is because I have seen the anime. Not the worst... but I do definitely believe this could use a rewrite.
Hunter x Hunter: A Selfish Wish (COMPLETED)
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Is there really anything happening in the HxH world before the Chimera Ants.đ¤ˇââď¸ But really though, I know that the power increase isn't consistent. It is supposed to be like that. The 'System' isn't just like a Gemer System given by a higher being. It was created by the MC's Nen and the conditions on it are harsh. People misunderstand thinking that the gamer system is gonna have the same rules as other systems. That is wrong, exp isn't calculated like that or anything like the gamer system. In the beginning he hot so much Exp from only three hunters? Why is that... well it will be explained along the story. I just hope it raises your opinion on the story.đ¤Łđ
