Review Detail of amaturewriter in The Great Lion

Ur other bk is amazing, this so far is also amazing. so here have the stars. An SI as a nephew of tywin rather than his son or bastard....nice. I love the interactions between tywin and MC, more would be nice. And reading C5, u might;ve more or less captured his personality. rare in an FF also nice. PLus, i decent eng and grammar is another plus I suppose. **: tyrion,,,be friends...damn man, this dude has a sad life. also he is smart and useful. same with hound, also ...... *Roman tactics and ships and toilets and sewage *soap and glass and also teach to make plows and weapons and **** *basic hygiene *farming and crop rotation *make MC a seer and warg? use ants and crows to spy? and I;ll ask the same thing I ask all GOT FF writers, if theres romance, dont make it sad, dont make the chick useless slut/princess....make her useful. ---anyway, like ur other ****, and this **** too...dont drop. GL