Item: The Great Lion
Rating: 2.2
Author: Krutch

KrutchLv44yr

2020-11-30 08:17

MC becomes unlikable about halfway through, different plots just kill whatever character development was established for him and his family. Much worse than the author's professor dovahkin story, but it doesn't really matter since author can't finish anything he starts anyway.

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