shameless author review here,it's a pretty good story and for current and future readers,I would appreciate it if you guys commented on the chapters,and also left reviews if you could,but I understand that not everyone likes making comments or writing reviews,for those of you that do though,I'd appreciate it if you did.
rosemoon
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LIKESome people just have grammar problems. It’s a common thing. In fact, so common, I bet that everyone on this planet makes mistakes in their grammar at least 100 times in their lifetime. ( sorry not tryna be rude if this sounds rude )
TheSleepingCow:Dude you need to put a space after each comma. Like this: “yesterday, i was...”
Nah you good. I wasn’t berating him tho. I was just helping him. I didn’t think i’d be considered rude.
ItsPotato:Some people just have grammar problems. It’s a common thing. In fact, so common, I bet that everyone on this planet makes mistakes in their grammar at least 100 times in their lifetime. ( sorry not tryna be rude if this sounds rude )