Review Detail of A_Plane in In to the Warhammerverse

I really enjoy this fan fic because there arent many others like this, but the main thing that moves this down from being a super Good book is the characters. Especially the mc, he is to quote many others “Beta male trash” and it makes it very unappealing to root for him. He had time for characters devolpment when he gets betrayed by his favorite uncle, and instead of being more desceisive or ruthless, he stays the same and uses some of his cheats to get more loyal followers. Only other thing is grammer and spelling, author makes a couple mistakes here and there but ints nothing too big.