So far this story has been going strong. The Main Character has already shown some mental growth, and has a well grounded personality, and we can even see the start of more mental growth.
Now, this story seems to be a Minor to Mild AU at the moment, however it seems to generally keep in line with all established rules of the Universe, and Major events seem to have happened, even if slightly changed.
One Change that is important to note is that Hayley is younger than her canon counterpart, with canon Hayley being a few years older then the MF Gang, whereas this one is the same age. This comes with a few consequences, and I'm eagerly waiting to see how the Author explores this.
Another change is the fact that an interesting Propechy swirls around Hayley, which leads to a few questions. What is Darkness? If their is Darkness is their light? And many more questions.
Now, a minor setback, is the fact that her like of the Mikaelsons does seem rather heavy handed. She seems to have some sort of irrational liking of them, to the point where she is even 'drawn' to old objects of theirs, and seems to want to help them. This can be explained slightly because of certain events that caused a unique relationship with a Mikaelson, but it still does come off as rather heavy handed, as the Author is coming into this knowing the MCs relationships, and that shows in how the MC interacts with the world.
