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Too many inconsistencies throughout the story and also the last chapter i read the mc meets Van Augar and somehow doesnt recognize him and the author must have no idea that Van Augar is all about fate and that nonsense but not once did he mention it lol it seemed like it was an oc by how he acted until he said his name. Also there are bunch of multiple reviews on this fanfic with 5/5 so it is going to boost the rating so beware lol
One Piece: Finally Free
TheEnlightenedSage
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I don't know what you mean by inconsistency. I never stated that he didn't know him. At the end of their conversation, Ken said, what are the chances, which indicates that he knows him. And Van Auger did talk a little about fate, so you saying that he said nothing is wrong. I just didn't immediately say his name to make you guys guess it. I hope you can change your rating or give me a better reason why you gave me such a low rating. Have a nice dayđ
If someone who follows one piece and âmagicallyâ placed in the one piece world and they saw Van auger they would recognize him. The entire forst interaction woth the mc and Van auger didnt have fate mentioned at all lol maybe at the very end of the chapter but thats most likely because you just forgot and had to add it lol he is ALWAYS talking about fate.... when he didnt say his name you had 0 idea that it was him only way thatbyiu could guess was that the guy used a gun.... he acted like an OC not the actual character lol
TheEnlightenedSage:I don't know what you mean by inconsistency. I never stated that he didn't know him. At the end of their conversation, Ken said, what are the chances, which indicates that he knows him. And Van Auger did talk a little about fate, so you saying that he said nothing is wrong. I just didn't immediately say his name to make you guys guess it. I hope you can change your rating or give me a better reason why you gave me such a low rating. Have a nice dayđ
It's true that he didn't talk about fate a lot, but that's because I don't know his character very well. It would be impossible for me to write every character perfectly. And I started using fate more, because you told me about that. If you're going to continue reading the story I hope that you'll enjoy the future chapters more.
DarthVegito:If someone who follows one piece and âmagicallyâ placed in the one piece world and they saw Van auger they would recognize him. The entire forst interaction woth the mc and Van auger didnt have fate mentioned at all lol maybe at the very end of the chapter but thats most likely because you just forgot and had to add it lol he is ALWAYS talking about fate.... when he didnt say his name you had 0 idea that it was him only way thatbyiu could guess was that the guy used a gun.... he acted like an OC not the actual character lol
TheEnlightenedSage:It's true that he didn't talk about fate a lot, but that's because I don't know his character very well. It would be impossible for me to write every character perfectly. And I started using fate more, because you told me about that. If you're going to continue reading the story I hope that you'll enjoy the future chapters more.
