Review Detail of NerdofDao in Nerd in another world

Hey there! Author is here! Writing books and all is new to me . So there will be bound to be all mistakes. But I assure you, as I gain experience, number of mistakes will definitely be lot lesser. So help me to become better writer with your critiques and suggestions. In the end it will give you a good book to read. So give yourself and me a favor, and give me lots of feedbacks.