It may change with more chapter's but all look good so far There's a brief backstory on the world some that's a plus a few plot's going around while the MC goes through the survival arc that do need interlude's to work as plot hook, The grow pace on lv's is a lot slower that before the rewrite the story is overall better but i can't make a more detailed review without seeing more interaction betwen character's or an even Battle The MC just doesn't have the time or chance to do anything aside trying to survive and the lack of suporting cast make hard to fully get a full read on the MC personality
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