Review Detail of japprentice in Pokemon Tamer of Darkness(moved to fanfic section)

[review based on story synopsis] this story may not last long just like hundred others, it may have terrible grammar, bad plot, harem-centric, or number of other problems; but I give it 5 🌟 just for the points author mentioned in synopsis that I liked. there are few points that I liked about this story that Author has mentioned:no level system;need to train to be power ful; mega evolution as a surpassing level ability;and no catching logistically impossible Pokémon like wailord. my suggestion to the author would be: focus on Pokémon training; having harem is ok, don't make it the central focus of this fic; don't limit no. of moves Pokémon could learn, just make it difficult for weak trainers; also include how trainers maintain their living expenses, battle money should be small, gym challenges, contests, league winning should be higher but not everyone would be able to get that money, so alternative sources of income for trainers... there's lots of points to could help you create a great Pokémon fan-fictions, but not many are willing or capable to do it. I just hope you are logical with your writing.