Review Detail of AllWorldsEvil in Pokemon Tamer of Darkness(moved to fanfic section)

Author here, im still new about typing/writing a story, so a critics, comments, or something like will be appreciate, and that will make me know theres people follow my story and that will boost my mood to type/write lol (≧∇≦)/ i still suck at writing in english, so im very sorry if theres will be many error/mispelling, i hope u guys will help me to corrected it 💪 anyway i hope you guys can really enjoy my story (˵ ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°˵)