To be fair, 6 chapters is not enough for me to give a complete review. However, what I have read so far, I like and in a way there are some similarities with your other work Eternal Love, I'm just hoping there will be a fair amount of differences as well. As long as there are more chapters, and it remains interesting I'll continue to read. Just keep the timeline as real as possible to match the actions that are happening or are about to happen. I've noticed of late novels that push a lot of real time activities in 1-2 months when you actually think about it would be around 6 to 7 months is starting to annoy me. Make it align to be more believable. You cannot have a situation whereby in the space of 1 month the FL and supporting characters have done e.g. - got out of the hospital - 100% super healthy, married, become star of the show, have the ML in love with her, become a medical/martial artist to the nth degree, save everyone from a car accident, got new BFF who are loyal to her, got rid of the white lotus and suddenly receive all the love from her birth parents etc. etc. It does not make sense and its a turn off. Since she is in the hospital let the FL use the time wisely and not so much drama, when she and ML fall in love give them 4 to 6 months to do so. They can show some interest in each other at the start. Wish you all the best.
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it's a really interesting story so far but hv some similarities with other novel so it would be better to hv some differences nd make the fl more bold nd outgoing but i lvd the storyline so far so I'll continue reading the story nd hope to hv daily updates can't wait to read the next ch nd the intresting events being unfold in future all the best with ur writing plzzzz give daily updates [img=recommend]