Review Detail of midnight_bloom in MINE (an elite school trilogy)

Looking good. It's cool. 😎 I was surprised to see that there will be supernatural beings here. The cover decieved me lol. (I went inside and checked out the auxiliary volume without reading the syno**is. The lost of supernatural beings fascinated me). I enjoyed reading it right drom the forst paragraph. It's easy to read and follow. The storyline flows smoothly from one chapter to the next. Characters are well-designed too. Our girl Lexine has some attitude. Im totally liking it. I appreciate that author gives extra effort in staging mini theatres after the chapters. It adds more fun to the reading experience. I just want to point out a few areas for improvement. For one, some paragraphs are indented, some are not. I'm not so sure if it's intentional? There are also minor typo's and punctuation issues but those are just minor compared to the quality of the plotline which is very promising. This novel is awesome!!!! 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗