Review Detail of Daoist_Loop in EMPRESS OF THE LOST KINGDOM

So this is quite a good novel except that there were some mistakes. 1. In some chapters, there are small mistakes that disturb the readers but its not much of a problem as it don’t affect the quality by much. 2. The chapters seem to be too orderly, as if its stating facts and not writing a story. It feels rough. Making how the characters feel and making it more descriptive would be good. 3. The chapters are too long, it would be better if they are divided into two or three parts. This could also make writing the story better as if you’re not finding any ideas for it, you could do as [2] said and make the reading time more enjoyable. 4. Sometimes the question marks and such are excessive. They make the character look very surprised and since they are often it disturbs the readers, making the reader not concentrate on the story. Just using it once would be alright. 5. The story characters seems to be too simple and straightforward. Adding in more emotions and making them complex like a human being would be alright.