Review Detail of bibiyenini in Aila's True Love

Have to say that this book has a lot of potential in the romance genre. The characters and plotline were the outlines of the real-life and how it affects our surroundings. I want to suggest to edit the synopsis more so it can be appealing to the readers. Remember that synopsis was supposedly written with how the readers will know a brief overview of what will happen in the first part of the story and how it will intrigue them to read more through your novel. Or else it may not click in. There were also grammatical errors I want to point out like the punctuations and such, but it can be proofread through. Overall, your novel is beautiful and good! Keep it up!